Question regarding job description for my resume…?

Question by emilbus33: Question regarding job description for my resume…?
does this sound okay

Marketing Coordinator
Help members of the organization move their business forward with marketing advise and consulting. Design, layout, copy write, and edit 12-page monthly newsletter and weekly e-newsletter. Create all marketing materials for events and seminars as well as invitations, logos, and program books. Update and manage website with content management tools. Assist event coordinator in planning social networking events for area businesses.

Best answer:

Answer by treat faerie
Yes, that’s good

I might switch the sentence about “create all marketing materials” with the one “update and mange website”. Mostly because the last sentence has to do with events and that would group the events concept together instead of splitting them up.

I don’t see anything that really needs to be cut out but it’s kind of a long job description. If you can think of what is redundant or two things that can be said at once you could tighten it up

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2 Responses to “Question regarding job description for my resume…?”

  1. cam can help says:

    It’s pretty long for a resume.

    What about

    Move organization forward with marketing advise and consulting. Design, layout, copywrite, and edit newsletters (weekly e-news and 12 page monthly). Create all marketing materials for events/seminars including invitation, logos, and program books. Assist event coordinator in planning social networking events. Update and manage website.

  2. Your resume is a marketing document. You are marketing yourself. In an uncertain economic climate, you must make the most of every opportunity you have to give yourself an advantage in a competitive job market. Your resume is the first place you can distinguish yourself from other candidates.